Erskine best kept secret,
Rusting gates open a vine garden,
Cracked paths wobble as we walk,
Old windows, cracked walls and graffiti,
New parts scatter in between old,
Old soggy news paper from 10 years ago,
Beer bottles skater the window sills,
Erskine best kept secret,
Ben Baker
I love this poem because it paints a vivd picture in my mind.
ReplyDeleteReuben
ReplyDeleteThis is such a good poem.I like the Cracked paths wobble as we walk part.
Hollie says I like how it starts and ends by erskines best keep secret
ReplyDeleteCharlotte says
ReplyDeleteI just like it all together!
Sofia-
ReplyDeleteI like the part where is goes rusting gates open a vine garden.
this is amazing
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