Diving at Stingray Bay
Splash! As we dive in all of the fish shoot past us. We swim towards the current to reach a rocky reef. I tried to swim through a cave to see if a crayfish was there but I was too scared. We crawl on the reef to find a good spot to dive. As we swim fast towards the sharp rocks, the sea glides me to shore.
I wait for my uncle and dad while I’m trying to catch mullet in a big, open rock pool. I use my red net as the mullet shoot past.
“When are they coming back?” I wonder to myself.
“Yes!” I say. I see fins, snorkels, two orange floats and spears pop up.
“What did you guys catch?” I exclaim.
By Joseph
Wow Joseph!! I always knew that you were a fabulous writer, and this proves it. Keep up the great work and remember there is always a smelly sticker for any of your great work if you walk it across the road to show me. Mrs Z
ReplyDeleteCharlotte says good writing
ReplyDeleteJoseph, I love the precise verbs you choose in this piece. Great writing!
ReplyDeleteBeulah says: great poem Joseph . Lots of strong verbs.
ReplyDeleteMadison says wow what a piece of writing Joseph
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